Challenges, Short story

Love Nudges ~ Attraction

Posted by Stephanie Colpron on

In response to Lynn’s challenge to answer Love Nudges. Today’s prompt is Attraction
The rule:
Your writing can take any form – poem (tanka, haiku, ode, blank verse, limeric – whatever you fancy, knock your poetic socks off): prose (up to three sentences), song lyric, ditty, advertising blurb … Really, whatever you fancy as long as it’s short-ish.

The first thing he noticed were her bright smiling eyes, filled with nothing but kindness. Then he heard her unfettered and infectious laughter. Was it any wonder he fell in love without even knowing her name?

©scolpron2016

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  1. kittykatsbitsandbobs says:
    8 February, 2016 at 13:07

    Perfectly done!

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    1. MyLovingWife says:
      8 February, 2016 at 17:18

      Thank you so very much. I liked yours a lot as well. I do need to comment more 😉.

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      1. kittykatsbitsandbobs says:
        8 February, 2016 at 17:39

        Thanks!

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  2. Sonya says:
    8 February, 2016 at 15:12

    Ooh, I like it!

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    1. MyLovingWife says:
      8 February, 2016 at 17:19

      Thank you 🙏🏻

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  3. Lynn Love says:
    8 February, 2016 at 17:21

    Ah, that first moment of attraction – magical! Something just draws you to people, doesn’t it? Thanks so much for taking part. Lovely stuff 🙂

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    1. MyLovingWife says:
      8 February, 2016 at 17:24

      Thank you very much for offering the prompt. I look forward to the others 😉.
      I like to look at what originally brings people together. Sometimes – rarely – it’s what keeps them together. The dynamics of relationships is such a fascinating thing. Thank you again.

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      1. Lynn Love says:
        8 February, 2016 at 17:48

        Thank you so much for taking part! It is intriguing, isn’t it? What attracts two people, when other people don’t feel the same? If people could really explain sexual chemistry, someone would bottle it and make a fortune! Look forward to reading more of your writing if you have chance to take part 🙂

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