Wordle #123 ~ Dead Man Walking

His bony fingers clutched the bars almost of their own volition. In the peculiar light of the hour before day break the trees looked like spectral corpses dancing in the wind; like cadavres at the gallows. The inertia of the hour didn’t seem to apply to hung men.

Later today, he would get out: but serving time in jail wasn’t enough for someone like him. It didn’t matter that he was only 14; he’d gotten into a brawl with the wrong man. It hadn’t been his fault; he’d merely bumped into him by mistake. He hadn’t even tried to pick the gentleman’s pocket but the man screamed ‘thief, murder!’ Before jumping him.

And the police wasn’t going to believe the guttersnipe over the gentleman, who unfortunately was an MP’s son. What chance did he have? Every person in the courtroom chorused for his sentence. Here in his birdcage he waited…

At dusk he would walk the crow’s mile. And tomorrow in the peculiar light of the hour that precedes sunrise, he would join the trees and be the spectral vision of a corpse hanging from the gibbet.


In response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie writing prompt Wordle #123.
1. Guttersnipe (Noun. A person belonging to or characteristic of the lowest social groupin city. A street urchin.) 2. Chorus 3. Birdcage 4. Spectral 5. Late 6. Break 7. Dusk 8. Serve 9. Crow’s mile (The walk of the condemned to the place of his execution.) 10. Button 11. Brawl 12. Inertia

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  1. Powerful political piece.

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    1. Thank you. I’ll be honest I didn’t really intend it to be political although the way the story evolved made me think of the title of Victor Hugo’s Le Dernier Jour d’un Condamne. And Hugo was nothing if not a political story teller 😉 .

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      1. Even my piece has a political undercurrent, and I was primarily silly. I think none of us are immune to what is happening in the world. No one is truly apolitical. Not such a bad thing if your thinking is a la Hugo.

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